Its About My new novel Ele-Mental.My book is about a kid Who finds out he has Element Powers.He is mental.Crazy.He also has moodswings.When he gets mad he controls fire.when he gets scared he controls water.and so on. Its A book about a superhero with a not so super role. Anything I Should Include? Take Out? etc.?
-Prologue:
Mental Fate
The amusement park was deserted. The park rides were shut down because it was barely dawn, and they do not open until later. No other living or breathing thing was to be seen, not counting the bugs surrounding me and the dark shadow just dazed in a trance. He was bearing the only reasons I have to protect this world in his hands. The only reasons I was living in it. They were the reasons that gave me power to ever control what was creating inside me. He was caressing them like if they were his own. I felt my fists tighten, disgusted because he was holding them. I licked my lips and I tasted metal because they were covered with blood. I should have known he would come after my family. I thought I was always one step ahead of it but I was wrong.
Standing at the top of the Ferris wheel, I gazed at the dark figure ten feet ahead of me. Two Ferris wheel carts in-between us. He smirked, to show his pointy yellow teeth, because he knew I didn’t have any other choice, as if he had planned for this all along. None of us were moving. One sudden movement would give me a chance to attack. Emotions inside me were getting out of control. I can see the different colors changing in my body based on what I was feeling. When I was mad; red, nervous; blue, sad; white, excited; yellow, calm; brown, happy; light blue, and pleasured; green, like a color changing human light bulb. It was hurting me, but I learned to block the pain.
I thought about taking a leap at him but he quickly read my mind. He then looked up at me. In an instant he clasped the legs of my twin baby brothers. They were hanging upside down. He held one with his right hand and one with left hand. It extended them to act like if he was going to drop them atop from the Ferris wheel. It glared at me with dark eyes like a cobra ready to attack a mongoose.
“I have been waiting for this all my life” it snarled, “come and get them.” And to the extent of my imagination he let them go.
Fury and anger swept through me. I saw the fire environed around my whole body as if I was caught on fire. In an instant I jumped off the Ferris wheel cart and I soared down to save my baby brothers. First the one that was closest to hitting the ground and then the other, knowing it would come after me. I was reaching out to grab Lyle before he hit the ground, I looked back and stared at the dark shadow that was turning into an immense monstrosity of insects.*****Bad/Good Opinions For My Prologue Please?I like it! It is very good.
